Friday, 1 March 2013

The Day Our Car Came To Life

the day our car came to life

It was hailing outside and we had to get some and food,so dad ran out to the car and drove to the shops.When he came back he had a lot of stuff,he had pizzas, tacos, lollies, games, computers and a play station,”we won a prize” dad said.The next day we washed the car with the new ‘power wash’ sponge and it made the whole car glitter in the sun,but something terrible happened,the car started turning into a robot!It had a jet pack,heat seeking missiles,a shield,a machine gun and a light saber.Then it gets worse the robot called Zeus flew away to destroy the whole world!Then I came up with a brilliant plan, I scrubbed myself with the power wash and I flew away to save the day.When I found Zeus I used a heat seeking missile to destroy him, but before I could take the shot he was helping someone play checkers, so he came home with me and changed back to car mode.

5 comments:

  1. Cool Marcus I really like the car it looks really fast.

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  2. Its lucky that you're car didn't destroy the hole world Marcus it would of been very unfortunate for all the people that wanted to live.

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  3. I like you said that the car had a shield and a ligth saver

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  4. Great story Marcus and like the car. Anyway how did you know that your car might destroy the entire world? Keep up the amazing work!!

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  5. Spectacular story Marcus keep up the excellent work marcus

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